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The Dance

If I were to take your hand And ask you to dance By the light of the moon Would you take a chance You know I am just a dreamer Or so it would seem For there is nothing I won't do In search of my dream To me a dream is but a story Waiting to be told And as a poet writes their dream They try to break the mold So as you dance across your dream Trying to get it right Close your eyes and drift away Dance with me tonight As we dance across the floor Know my words are true I have answered all my dreams Just by holding you

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Date: 5/9/2009 6:14:00 AM
Dear Micheal,Congratulations on YOUR POEM "The dance" being Featured this week YOUR LOVE is not a dream It is Forever ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/9/2009 1:49:00 AM
Nice structure Michael and congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 5/6/2009 12:27:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. I really like your poem.
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Date: 5/5/2009 9:19:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Great writing. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 5/4/2009 3:44:00 PM
congrads on being featured. john
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Date: 5/4/2009 2:16:00 PM
Michael I'll dance with you! lolol No ,very sweet such a heartfelt piece Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 5/4/2009 11:42:00 AM
Wow Michael, you've taken a dance to another level, excellent. James
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Date: 5/4/2009 10:14:00 AM
Simply beautiful in both content and form. Congrats on your feature! Kat
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Date: 5/4/2009 8:15:00 AM
Congrats on having this great dream selected. Love, daver
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Date: 5/4/2009 7:51:00 AM
Mr. Jordan,..this poetry is fantastic! congrats on being featured tis week! james
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Date: 5/4/2009 7:13:00 AM
Congratulations Michael on "The Dance" being featured. Beautful write. Vince
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Date: 5/4/2009 6:31:00 AM
Simply magnificent. Congrats dear Michael on a most beautiful featured write. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/4/2009 4:24:00 AM
Wow!!! The Michael Jordan Poetry form! Both poems stand alone and interlock equally well. What a clever form you have devised. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep inventing. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/4/2009 3:44:00 AM
Wonderful writing, Congratulations on being featured, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 5/4/2009 3:17:00 AM
a wonderful poem well written congrats on your work being featured God bless you from diane
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Date: 5/4/2009 1:02:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Michael Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:55:00 PM
My friend Michael, congratulations on your featured write this week.Mime is also featured. Ernilando
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Date: 5/3/2009 7:32:00 PM
Nice uplifting view in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 5/3/2009 7:29:00 PM
A dreamy poem, Michael...I think anyone would love to dance after reading this. Congratulations on this being featured this week! Well done, my friend and neighbor! Love, Carrie
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Date: 9/8/2008 8:45:00 PM
love that last two lines really a very touching poem thank you for reading a tree today and for your comment
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