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The Curtain

The sky begins blue Along comes sunshine Slowly a change comes A pale blue shade sky Then a grey tone shows The blackness comes Bringing the bright moon With the shining stars Like a curtain it is evening

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Charlie Smith

Date: 8/31/2018 8:49:00 AM

Well done Darlene, hope your feeling better and getting around OK...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/31/2018 3:12:00 PM

Hello Charlie, yes i am doing well thank you. I am walking with a cane now. A little different going up the stiars with a cane. I got the hang of it now. Have a nice day my friend.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/30/2018 11:50:00 PM

I like how you did this, the delivery is quiet yet dramatic at the same time. All the best ... CayCay

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/31/2018 3:14:00 PM

Hello CayCay,thank you for the lovely comment. It was fun to do. Have a nice day my friend.

Joseph May

Date: 8/30/2018 6:09:00 PM

The many colorss of the sky..Nicely penned Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/31/2018 2:51:00 PM

Hello Joseph, thank you for the lovely comment. Yes the sky does have many colours. I enjoyed to create this poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/30/2018 3:40:00 PM

Good description--especially the simile, Darlene! Janice

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/31/2018 2:49:00 PM

Hello Janice,thank you for the lovely comment. This poem was fun to write. Have a nice day my friend.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/30/2018 1:14:00 PM

I love the comparison here; bringing down that night curtain. Great flow in this poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/30/2018 1:51:00 PM

Hello M.L. Kiser, Thank you for the lovely comment.This is the image i wanted to portray. Have a nice day my friend.

Augustus Black

Date: 8/21/2018 12:30:00 PM

Hi. Darlene.. What a cool and natural poem. You live in the nature.... Wow... Nice one... Good day.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/30/2018 12:50:00 PM

Hello Augustus Black, I live in a area that has lots of trees,in the city.I see squirrels and chipmunks and birds. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/21/2018 8:01:00 AM

Beautiful!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/30/2018 1:04:00 PM

Hello Richard, I have not been on the computer for awhile because I had surgery done on my toe. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/21/2018 12:35:00 AM

Curtains can be drawn open...inspired by your great write my friend...let the sunshine in...love & light...^WW^

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/30/2018 1:03:00 PM

Hello Winged Warrior, I referred to the darkness as the curtain bringing in the darkness to end the day light light.Yes bring in the sun. Have a nice day my friend.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 8/21/2018 12:21:00 AM

Love it Darlene!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/30/2018 1:20:00 PM

Hello Timothy,thank you for the lovely comment.I have had surgery done on my big toe. That is why i have not been on the computer. Have a nice day my friend.

Lyric Man

Date: 8/20/2018 11:04:00 PM

But what if I pull that curtain. There I see a gifted writer who can turn her word’s into colorful art. You pull me in, Darlene!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/8/2019 2:15:00 PM

Hello Lyric man, I say go ahead and pull that curtain to see me at my best. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/20/2018 10:31:00 PM

Yes, the curtain of nightfall that draws a close to the day. Lovely imagery and beautiful poetry, Darlene. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/30/2018 1:17:00 PM

Hello Susan, yes the curtain of darkness takes over covering the day light. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/20/2018 12:31:00 PM

So True, Darlene, The curtain of twilight. Lovely write xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/20/2018 1:41:00 PM

Hello Mike, I hope you are having a nice day. This is how i see the day as it changes form one extreme to another. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/20/2018 11:20:00 AM

Very nice Darlene :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/20/2018 1:43:00 PM

Hello Heidi, thank you for the lovely comment my friend. Have a nice day.

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/20/2018 11:04:00 AM

What a wonderful day it was...Lovely...All the best Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/20/2018 1:47:00 PM

Hello Micheal, yes it was a wonderful day. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my firend.