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The Crescent Moon

I saw the crescent moon last night I could have sworn that he winked It was indeed such a beautiful sight He was majestic and wonderful linked Then I drifted off to sleep And found myself on the moon Next I began to weep Tears of joy, it was lovely tune I've never known such peace It just filled my soul All of the madness ceased I was completely whole Then I woke up And the peaceful feeling stayed Joy and peace filled my cup This feeling can never be swayed 4-30-17 Alexis Y.

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/2/2017 5:02:00 AM

Hello Alexis. To have peace either in sleep or being awake is such a gift and feeling as well. Hold on to that. May nothing diminish that. You graced us with a wonderful image and moment in time. Well done entirely.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/1/2017 3:09:00 PM

Wonderful feeling this imparts, Alexis. I would love to wake up from dreams like this.

Chris Green

Date: 5/1/2017 7:59:00 AM

It's so nice to wake from a wonderful dream and have it last the entire day through. A beautiful poem and a mesmerizing theme Alexis. Really nicely done my friend.

Barry Stebbings

Date: 5/1/2017 2:56:00 AM

Liked this piece, Alexis. There is something about the crescent moon that catches one's and casts a spell. // Barry

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/30/2017 11:21:00 PM

Very spiritual, loved this Alexis!

White Wolf

Date: 4/30/2017 9:25:00 PM

What a lovely rhyme, Alexis! You wouldn't be the first one cast under its spell! Beautifully written.