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The Best Part

The best part Today I gazed at the rising sun and thought back to the mornings we shared Watching pastel skies in those rose petal and apricot swirls that you loved so much Sadly realizing the best part of the sunrise to me wasn’t the watching, it was the sharing… I miss you Good morning Soupers

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Date: 2/13/2017 4:55:00 PM
A lovely and poignant poem, Chris. The absence is as aching as the departure. Very well expressed in this poem. A tinge of sadness ... why not, it's a Monday. A real soulful poem. Love and peace
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 5:12:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend for your kind thoughts.
Date: 2/13/2017 9:40:00 AM
Cheerful in its melancholy dear, Chris! Beautiful imagery!
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 11:54:00 AM
Thanks so very much Demetrios
Date: 2/13/2017 8:01:00 AM
Melancholic ..Sad...I can feel this..For both of you to watch the sun rising or to share the sun rising together..Indeed different..So many emotions here Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 11:53:00 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend.
Date: 2/13/2017 7:52:00 AM
Good morning Chris. That is so true about the sharing and the difference there is to be when it is missed so much. Nice write, keep it up :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 11:53:00 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi
Date: 2/13/2017 7:35:00 AM
- It's all about sharing, Chris .... the best part of life - Experience alone is not the same - A touching and lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 11:53:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend.
Date: 2/13/2017 6:47:00 AM
It's true, it's the sharing.... What Tim said. And I am glad to see you :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 11:52:00 AM
Thank you Darren.
Date: 2/13/2017 6:14:00 AM
Being with the one you love just adds to the beauty of the experience. Believe she is watching too thinking of you.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 11:52:00 AM
Thanks so much Tim.

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