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The Angels Could Have-

The Angels Could Have… The angels came to praise the Savior's birth. Where in a manger wrapped in rags He lay. God’s greatest gift to all mankind on earth, Christ, grew to know His Father day by day. A mortal man called; Joseph knew God’s plan. He married Mother Mary his betrothed. A vision came to him, oh, blessed man. And set love on the road that God proposed. His earthly parents raised Him as a man. And God the Father trained Him in right ways. In Nazareth Christ Jesus knew God’s plan And taught the word of God to kings and slaves. Alas the time had come for sacrifice. The garden where He prayed, “Thy will, not mine…” His life, betrayed by kiss, sold for a price. That very night, to God, His will resigned. The angels in the heavens would have come. But never did He from us turn His face. Sin nailed Him to the cross and stood it plumb. Because of His great love we have God’s grace. © © Dane Smith-Johnsen January 30, 2010 Poetic form: Iambic Pentameter

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Date: 2/1/2010 10:36:00 PM
Dear Dane Ann, my congratulations on your poem winning a place in the contest! Thank you for your kind comments today! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 2/1/2010 12:48:00 PM
Dane Ann, Congratulations on your win. This is beautifully written and very inspirational. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 2/1/2010 12:32:00 PM
Dane, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your win in the Faith contest to my other comment. Keep that faith shining! Enjoy your honor. Karen
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Date: 2/1/2010 11:03:00 AM
Hi Dane Ann. Congratulations on winning with this lovely poem and your comments on mine. I agree Peter's denial was God's plan and the faith of those followers of Jesus was phenominal and Peter's role second to none. My post crucifixion faith cannot compare. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/1/2010 2:59:00 AM
Wonderful meditation. Congratulations Dane Ann. Robert
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Date: 1/31/2010 6:02:00 PM
God's Grace...isn't it wonderful?? Just like your poem...it speaks to us all..Enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 1/31/2010 11:13:00 AM
Great write and writings thanks for congrats and the kind words as far as Jim goes only distantanly related and about killed myself with that stuff and Jesus could have also I am glad he chose the cross aint no rock gonna cry in place praise Jesus Holy name!
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Date: 1/31/2010 6:41:00 AM
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Date: 1/30/2010 5:54:00 PM
A great write, Dane. Yes, it's too bad you missed that contest because this could have been the number one winner! I liked how you gave significance to the garden. He sufferered all our sins in that place.Also. "sin nailed him to the cross" Very powerful line. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/30/2010 5:45:00 PM
This is very beautifully written, I am truly sorry you missed my Angel contest. but keep this in mind for another contest, I am sure it will fit in one of them.. perhaps the very next one...
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Date: 1/30/2010 5:17:00 PM
The last line says it all, Dane Ann. You have a gift for spiritual motivation. Enjoyed this one very much! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/30/2010 1:39:00 PM
What an inspirational poem. Good way to share a faith message. If this is for Constance's angel contest, good luck. Keep your faith shining. Karen
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Date: 1/30/2010 11:39:00 AM
Beautiful poem. A great tribute. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/30/2010 9:26:00 AM
Beautiful, Dane-Ann. Our Lord's passion never ceases to amaze me. This is well-written and inspirational. Peace and love, Audrey P.S. Thank you for reading and leaving your kind comments on my poem. Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 1/30/2010 8:51:00 AM
plumb; a word few understand that my grand parents used often. yes Plumb discribes what He did. John H Loving III
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