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The Air I Inhale Deep

A new swirled lemon sunset furled. Dolphins leap, waves begin to creep Within footprints reach, graceful sweep. Inward whirls round in my main world; This is the air I inhale deep. Gray fog ease gnarled trees wakeful lie; Loud falls rush over fallen bark, Enthralled hush call seep forest sigh. Men labor from wan dawn till dark. My real world, my lullaby Tale, embarks dreams hued clear and stark. 1/30/2020 8 syllables per line ABBAB-CDCDCD 4.) The air I inhale is for my lullaby tale

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Date: 2/26/2020 5:28:00 AM
Beautifully written, Eve. Congrats on your win! Hugs Charlie
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Date: 2/23/2020 10:45:00 AM
Eve! Not surprised to see this is yours. Lovely rhythm and rhyme too. Thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. X:-)
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Date: 1/31/2020 3:45:00 PM
How beautiful this is.
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Date: 1/31/2020 12:36:00 PM
- Sounds beautiful, dear Eve :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/31/2020 2:32:00 AM
Well composed Eve. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 1/31/2020 1:43:00 AM
So beautiful Eve!
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Date: 1/31/2020 12:19:00 AM
Beautiful lines.. Great entry in the contest Eve.. Good luck..
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