The Butterflies Dance - the Whitney Style

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~The Butterflies Dance~ (A Double Whitney) The sun is So warm and nice There is cheer Everywhere cause Spring has sprung One more time and Winter so cold is now gone The robins Have returned and The hibiscus And the roses Bloom again To my delight Now I see butterflies dance. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 March.29.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain- ~Author's Notes: The "Whitney" is a syllabic poetry form or style, that was created by Betty Ann Whitney. The "Whitney" is also known as an American Asian Poem.

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Chris Green

Date: 3/29/2017 4:33:00 PM

Spring has certainly arrived here and even if it hadn't. your beautiful poem would have caused it to feel like it had. Such warm touches float in your words.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/30/2017 4:47:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Chris, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully here on my poem and for the very generous 7.I deeply appreciate it all:)). Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)) D.