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That's Life

Drifting along with the tumble weeds used and discarded in a throw away world that's life a useless smile of imagination created by false pretense conjuring up images of a happy existence propped loosely upon shards of clay but really sinking in slowly with every step a neglected soul wallowing alone as others swallow all that's known red drops of rembrance paint darkened halls another day about to take the fall stand tall and don't believe them all worth is not measured in what you own but what you do

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Date: 1/3/2017 8:59:00 AM
So very true. I really nice poetic message Tim.
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Date: 1/3/2017 3:38:00 AM
I agree, especially those last two lines. But I must say: I see you, and I don't smile.
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Date: 1/2/2017 6:41:00 PM
very profound, tim! well-written, too...
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Date: 1/2/2017 4:23:00 PM
Powerful message Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/2/2017 1:57:00 PM
I agree.
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Date: 1/2/2017 1:24:00 PM
- So true and wise, great written Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/2/2017 12:10:00 PM
Great poem Tim - especially the last two lines! :-)
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Date: 1/2/2017 11:20:00 AM
Indeed worth is measured by how we live and not what we own...Powerful message Tim.
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Date: 1/2/2017 10:15:00 AM
and I will saddle my pony accordingly;-) Wise words well written! cheers from cactusville ~ j
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