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Facing lies and nagging doubts, you start to feel like a dunce. For your heart is being pulled in two directions at once. In a world of denial, reality disrupts dreams. And you spend long, lonely nights, awakened by silent screams. Sifting possibilities, you separate lies from truth. And grieve the lost innocence; you squandered on hopes of youth. Acid tears tend to increase the longevity of pain. But time slowly numbs the hurt, so you can dream once again. Love's allure is magical, offering eternal bliss. And risking a broken heart, you bet on that perfect kiss. (Quatrain) 6/30/2015

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Date: 3/6/2018 8:49:00 PM
Love this stanza "Sifting possibilities you separate lies from truth. And grieve loss of innocence squandered on the hopes of youth." Beautifully done, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/7/2018 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/1/2015 8:13:00 AM
enduring, poignant write with lyrical images... i like how this flows, emile.. huggs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/1/2015 12:11:00 PM
Thanks Nette, as always I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/30/2015 11:54:00 AM
So much is said in that one kiss, Emile. Though this is such a sad write...that last line brings hope.
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Date: 7/1/2015 8:02:00 AM
Thanks so much Eileen, as always I appreciate your support. Emile.

Book: Shattered Sighs