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R.J. Lindley,
May 25th, 1977

Note- (Poem was inspired by the (1968) cutting down of our childhood castle, swing and climbing kingdom of childhood fantasy). My younger brothers and sisters cried..
Forest behind our home was being timbered out for its dollar value in its old,mighty and majestic oak trees.
Although land was owned by others, children see such gems when so loved as their own..

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Total # Syllables: 152
Total # Words: 116

That Dark Day, Our Childhood Castle Was Felled Deed was dark, day of its felling deafening that mighty crash! Tragic this tale of the telling thoughtless men, acting so rash. Where rests now, its flying hordes, winged weary and storm attacked? Hammer and nails will pierce its boards another forest gem ransacked! Horror struck, sight of destruction young lad, heart was thus impaled; needed wisdom, life's instruction on why sincere prayer had failed! Mighty oak, child's treasured friend taken, slain as if not alive, yes, said - all things come to this end greed is gold, for its luster strive. When death invades, innocence lost will such deep scars ever heal? Can gold thus gained, justify cost when a child finds heart break real? R.J. Lindley, May 25th, 1977 Note- (Poem was inspired by the (1968) cutting down of our childhood castle, swing and climbing kingdom of childhood fantasy). My younger brothers and sisters cried.. Forest behind our home was being timbered out for its dollar value in its old,mighty and majestic oak trees. Although land was owned by others, children see such gems when so loved as their own..

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Date: 9/12/2017 8:43:00 PM
Your last line really got me Robert. The first time your heart is broken as a child is truly one of the saddest days. I remember when I felt heartbreak for the first time as a child... A very deeply moving, emotive and evocative write Robert. Such well expressed poetry in content, imagery, flow, rhythm and rhyme. Such a shame that your lofty kingdom was doomed - so much lost for Man's gain!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/13/2017 3:29:00 PM
Thank you for sharing the sadnesses in your heart. Your sadness was beautifully expressed and through your words I can imagine what a traumatic and heartbreaking experience it was. I am glad that you gave the sad experience a strong, poetic voice my friend :)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/13/2017 10:51:00 AM
Thank you my friend, for reading and commenting on this poem that has a very special place in my heart. As I wrote it with sadness in thinking/remembering about how deeply that great loss (that beloved tree) hurt my younger siblings! As well as the remaining ugliness, of that once wonderful/magical view, after that forest was so devastated. My sorrow was for their great loss and their innocence being far too early exposed to this dark world's greed.
Date: 9/12/2017 9:56:00 AM
As of your castle and all things precious - Man hunts for fortunes in wood and metal - The corporate men and their corporate bosses - Never see or feel the world of the children's losses - An appreciated and heartfelt poem "Robert" - As progress hurts - Indiana . . .
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/12/2017 12:44:00 PM
Thank you. Truth is--greed runs the world but to innocent children it all makes no sense. Their eyes are seeing with love and not financial gains.. Yet time and the world soon teaches that financial gain is to be king.. Reality is a hard taskmaster methinks.. Yet to survive a very necessary one..

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