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Thanks, My Love

For all the sweet moments we've had together, and many time our love seem to falter, for many pains we've together borne, and many gains that have accrued to our barns, for standing by when the ground wanted to give way, and the intensity of the sun seemed unbearable, for those days I was a thorn in your soft flesh, and you never chose to tear it away, for thousands years ahead for us to dream, and indulge in all our worldly treasure, for all of these and many more to come, I say thank you my love for being there for me. 16th Nov, 2012

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Date: 11/29/2012 11:37:00 AM
A very belated congratulations in Patricia's "Thank-You" contest Modupe. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2012 7:58:00 AM
Reviewing this one again. It's too bad you did not do it acrostic style for that one contest Count Your Blessings. well, I want to wish you a happy day, even though it is not Thanksgiving where you are. I hope you have everything you want and need, Modupe.
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Date: 11/19/2012 11:54:00 AM
Modupe. Congratulations with your "THANK YOU" poem,, very touching and loving ... Take care :-) ~PD
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Date: 11/18/2012 10:03:00 AM
CONGRATS MODUPE ON AN EXCITING TENDER WRITE AND GREAT WIN LUV ..
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Date: 11/17/2012 11:41:00 PM
Beautifully done Modupe! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/17/2012 6:44:00 PM
Wonderful tribute to your soul-mate, Modupe...congratulations on a well deserved win - Tim
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Date: 11/17/2012 4:00:00 PM
Wonderful dedication to your sweet darling.Good write...Kudos to you my sister..Congrats on your well deserved win...Keep flying...Bawo ni nkan o?
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Date: 11/17/2012 12:53:00 PM
I remember seeing this very recently. BIG congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 11/17/2012 11:58:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/17/2012 7:45:00 AM
Big Congratulations Modupe xx
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Date: 11/17/2012 6:26:00 AM
Well done, great words...Seren
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Date: 11/16/2012 11:18:00 PM
this is so precious. Love the line about the thorns. Very nice!
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Date: 11/16/2012 7:40:00 AM
What a lovely tribute, he must be thrilled xx
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