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Thank You Mother-I Love You

Nine months of suffering and pain In your womb you carried me without any complain I was nurtured inside of you until due date Giving birth to me brought your life happiness and gay Hush little baby every night You are hurt when you hear my little cry The way you cradle me as I suckle and lie Is just so special as it calms me down and to dreamland I fly As I reached toddler stage it was never easy for you Everything I scattered and on my clothes I pooped I didn't know you could act so cool In cleaning my messes because I was such a little fool OH !mother dearest "I LOVE YOU" Watching me grow up is what you are so fond of By and by as years roll I am a young woman now struggling for my tomorrow Your humble footsteps mom, I will follow I am so sorry for all the headaches and messes I know you'll forgive me because your love never lessen I'll work so hard to achieve my goals and pay my debts May you live longer and be blessed abundantly by our father in heaven !

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Date: 5/27/2018 7:33:00 AM
I can feel the love and acknowledgment of the pain caused in childhood. How lovely a child, you are to your mother, to acknowledge her wonderful care in your life!
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Ulamila Tinadrua
Date: 2/27/2020 1:35:00 AM
thank you :)
Date: 5/24/2018 10:45:00 PM
Guess you need to be here for a few months before I can follow. I'm new too.
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Date: 5/24/2018 10:45:00 PM
Guess you need to be here for a few months before I can follow. I'm new too.
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Date: 5/24/2018 10:44:00 PM
Words aren't feelings, but you're learning to express. Relax into this, write, revisit, re-write. None of us is perfect and neither is our handiwork, But I think you may have a kernel upon which to build something that you can truly be proud of. I'm going to watch you.
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Ulamila Tinadrua
Date: 5/24/2018 11:07:00 PM
Thank you Brian ! Your help will be appreciated. :)

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