Tension

My Suppressed Emotions in Silence screams agony Breath held under water Releasing tension bubbling up Into soothing folds of coolness Calming Me Sponsor: John Anderson Contest: Ring my Bell

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/22/2021 11:33:00 AM

Hello Carol Mitra, oh sometimes it takes a while for the tension to ease off and to relax. I hope all is well with you. enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/23/2021 10:50:00 AM

Hello Carol, Oh-I will have to remember that. Enjoy your day my friend. blessings.

Carol Mitra
Date: 6/22/2021 6:28:00 PM

Yes Darlene but when you swim it cools mind body and soul....and calms you down.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/22/2021 8:07:00 AM

You captured the meaning of tension well in your verse Carol. Hope your week is going well and good luck in the contest. Tom

Carol Mitra
Date: 6/22/2021 6:24:00 PM

A swim to release tension can often do wonders....I find it the coolest workout :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/22/2021 6:59:00 AM

Nicely rung the bell. Beautiful

Carol Mitra
Date: 6/22/2021 7:40:00 AM

Thanks Christuraj :)