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Ten Word Challenge----She Lived In a Fairytale

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In the fresca of her reckless dream were halos, multi-colored Cynosure is simply glowing with glamour, never knowing the dream, the wish, her fantasy is fragile reverie Is a place to fear, will waste her years and where her whims have led It will lead her on a lissome road that's paved with gold, she'll see but also cold, where she could freeze with empty years to dread A chatoyant moon up in the sky appears to leave no warning And words we know, like backs of hands are not clear words she'll understand Where fairytales, and charming men ineffable and kind, deceive the human mind Who can define or hide the truth, that's underlined, mistook? Mellifluous music. is all she hears Adagios, to fill the ears, contain her storybook While watching her, our ingénue, demure and pale She'll soon grow old behind the veil, panacea of tall dreams She'll fade into the mythical, her fairyland of schemes Sempiternal devotion, is not for everyone For sometimes cruel emotion, will take the heart and run
___________________________________________ Inspired by Silent One's Ten Word Challenge Words Used: Chatoyant: Cynosure: . Demure: Glamour: Ineffable: Ingénue: Lissome: Mellifluous: Panacea: Sempiternal

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Date: 5/28/2016 12:36:00 PM
Oh this is so good now I need to go and find a dictionary to find a few of these words. lol Awesome Carrie. Hope you had a great bday. love phyl
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Date: 5/25/2016 10:38:00 PM
you are SO good, Carrie. I never took his challenge. I just can't keep up any more here. It's all I can do just to return comments and then try to fit writing in whenever I can during the week. Hope you are enjoying this wonderful spring.
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Date: 5/13/2016 1:37:00 PM
Beautiful and sad, but such an excellent use of the words, Carrie. Congratulations on your meeting this challenge so well with this lovely free verse story poem. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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