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Temptation

_________________________ Gramma's apple pie caught my eye upon the shelf- a forbidding sight.......... _________________________ Contest ~ Apples ? Oranges ?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 6/1/2011 6:03:00 PM
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Another winner Rick.!~ CONGRATS!! with your poem in CAROL'S contest:-) glad to see you among all her chosen winners. Keep posting your good poems,..p.d.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/29/2011 11:11:00 PM
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Way to go, Rick. Congratulations on your win with your tasty senryu.
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Delysia Hendricks
Date: 5/29/2011 5:56:00 AM
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You naughty, naughty boy! Congratulations on your placement, Rick. :)
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 5/28/2011 11:39:00 PM
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savory... happy cheesr for the fine win, rick..:) huggs
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 5/28/2011 8:31:00 PM
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Congrats Rick on your first place win in Carol's contest .. another beauty ..enjoy luv..
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 5/28/2011 8:27:00 PM
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Clever! congrats to you Rick..well done. BG
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Joseph Osita
Date: 5/28/2011 3:37:00 PM
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Congrats on your big win with this amazing senyru!
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Kash Poet
Date: 5/28/2011 10:26:00 AM
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This is excellent Rick.Congrats on your 1st place win....
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Gautami Phookan
Date: 5/28/2011 9:45:00 AM
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Congratulations Rick on your 1st place win in Carol's contest. A brilliant senryu ,enjoyed !!
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 5/28/2011 8:27:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win in the contest of carol, Rick
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Gwendolen Song
Date: 5/28/2011 8:15:00 AM
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Whew!!! Great plays on words...The sugary stuff has to stay high outta reach at our home too. Congrats Gwendolen
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John Freeman
Date: 5/28/2011 6:38:00 AM
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Great idea, Rick, Congratulations on your honored first place. Agape, Moses
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Judy Konos
Date: 5/28/2011 6:26:00 AM
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Congratulations
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 5/28/2011 5:46:00 AM
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Congratulations on your placement in my contest ^Rick. I thank you so much for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 5/19/2011 3:57:00 PM
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Very clever and amusing as well, Rick! Best wishes in Carol's contest with your great senryu. Love, Carolyn
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 5/19/2011 1:46:00 PM
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hahah.. lovely humor and wit on the original temptation, Rick
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James Foulk
Date: 5/19/2011 12:06:00 PM
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this made me remember those Apple pies my grandma made, a great write, enjoyed reading it.
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 5/19/2011 11:57:00 AM
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Thank you for supporting my contest ^Rick. Love, Carol
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