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Tears of Loneliness

o gentle rain drops you are falling falling speedy, slowly just falling with your own-rhythm just falling I whisper, whisper to your rhythmic falling but no response I find o moderate rain drops you are falling what the apex source of you I don't know I see your falling and whisper no reply, no contact build up just falling, flooding and adieu graph -September 06, 2019 Chattogram

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Date: 9/24/2019 4:56:00 AM
Well crafted obra maestra. Post some more. I love it. Ernilando
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Date: 9/7/2019 3:42:00 AM
This is an outstanding poem. It has a rhythm, I feel in it! Panagiota
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Date: 9/6/2019 6:39:00 AM
You make us feel this! I love the line “what’s the apex source of you/I do not know”
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Date: 9/6/2019 4:07:00 AM
Mahtab, this poem rains like a raindrop. Oops! I mean moves and sounds like a raindrop. And rains like a raindrop.
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