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Tears of Grace

Cried shed tears.. Tears of sadness of which is.. Pain an aching heart, broken hearted and torn apart in shreds. Shreds scattered.. Unbearable it is.. As broken hearted shreds filled the air.. Thickness in the air.. Surrounded by an explosion of tears.. Raindrops falling from the sky, become teardrops.. Droplets of teardrops cascading over the horizon.. Winds blowing so strong filling the air.. The air clears as the winds slowly dissipate.. Above in the horizon a rainbow appears. Colorful rainbow as it soothes and comforts the soul.. Cried shed tears.. Tears of grace of which is..

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Susan Ashley

Date: 5/5/2018 11:32:00 PM

Wow! Robertina, your poem is an emotional beauty. A write with deep and poignant imagery that ends with a silver lining of hope. A gorgeous poem of artistic expression.. warmest wishes. ~Susan

Robertina B.
Date: 5/6/2018 12:50:00 PM

Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback, Susan!! I really appreciate your marvelous complements..

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/24/2018 2:23:00 AM

Could feel the pain expressed here. Sad poem soothed with rainbow. Very expressive.

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 2/23/2018 6:32:00 PM

I think the imagery used in this poem is exceptional. Sadness, true, but cleansing. There is in fact a Rainbow in this poem which adds lightness and color and the promise of eventual good vibes. Beautiful ending with "Tears of Grace". x

Robertina B.
Date: 2/24/2018 11:19:00 PM

Thank you so much!! I'm delighted you enjoyed it!!

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/21/2018 8:47:00 AM

Wow, Robertina. Such emotion. A beauty.

Silent One

Date: 2/21/2018 6:20:00 AM

A sad poem, well expressed..

Robertina B.
Date: 2/24/2018 11:19:00 PM

Thank you!!