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Taste of You

The cane grows tall and straight in the verdant field where we played in our naive youth, the purple stalks reflecting sweet memories in your bright eyes. How I laughed as the drops smeared viscous liquid all over your beautiful, youthful face. As you grew so did my feelings for you, laughter to ardent smiles, as I saw you change. Now, as the cane juice drips off your soft chin, no more do I laugh. I long to taste the sweetness of you, each sweet drop, bits of sugar in my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/9/2017 9:30:00 PM
What a delicious poem! Sweet and filled with tender thoughts.
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James Inman
Date: 9/10/2017 7:46:00 PM
Thank you Carole.
Date: 3/10/2017 6:27:00 PM
wow, this is REALLY nice, Ralph. That ending gets to ya!!! So glad I finally saw this one you posted a bit while back!!SEVEN
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James Inman
Date: 3/11/2017 5:47:00 AM
Thank you for the wonderful comment Andrea.
Date: 3/9/2017 7:19:00 AM
Congrats on your win, James. Love your take on the theme, great storytelling.
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James Inman
Date: 3/9/2017 7:24:00 AM
Thank you agnes.
Date: 2/27/2017 1:29:00 AM
Beautiful bittersweet sugar and meaningful. Great shape as well. A sand timer of life, Kai
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James Inman
Date: 2/27/2017 1:55:00 PM
Thanks for the nice comment Kai.
Date: 2/26/2017 4:04:00 PM
Love the shape and the wonderful content, James - congrats!
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James Inman
Date: 2/26/2017 6:26:00 PM
Thank you Greg.
Date: 2/25/2017 7:17:00 AM
JAMES I love your two etherees, the words are so b e a u t I f u l and thanks for visiting my older poem from 2015, titled, and that comes from within, that poem is very meaningful to me.
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James Inman
Date: 2/26/2017 12:33:00 PM
Thanks for the sweet comment BW.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/25/2017 7:18:00 AM
Oops ...A7
Date: 2/22/2017 1:05:00 PM
ohh, the allure of this poem comes from its masterful content and shape... well done and sensual as well, james..huggs
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James Inman
Date: 2/22/2017 1:16:00 PM
Thank you Nette. Have a sweet day.

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