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Tanka Xii

Revise! Revise! So I edited a long poem for the seventh time-- pulling weeds and watering garden time well-spent again

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Date: 7/9/2021 4:20:00 PM
I love analogy. yes, it can indeed be like gardening!
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 7/14/2021 8:43:00 AM
Thanks Andrea. God bless. Carol Louise
Date: 6/21/2021 9:08:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this, and for sharing your talent. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.
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Date: 6/18/2021 11:14:00 AM
This is definitely a case of determination, Carol, and a message to all never to give up. I love those two end lines :) Best regards // paul
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