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Tanka- 2

without- the waning sun warms my face shalom cloaks the wells within

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 4/5/2012 10:22:00 PM
wow,it IS good, Brian, and it is different syllable count from regular tanka too. Very cool win. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/4/2012 2:22:00 PM
I like this Brian. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 4/3/2012 10:37:00 PM
BRIAN , Congratulations with your beautiful win, in B E Susan's contest.. Have yourself a good night. :-) , luv~PD
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Date: 4/2/2012 9:17:00 PM
Congratulations Brian, on your winning Tanka. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/2/2012 10:24:00 AM
congrats Brian on an awesome win for these elegant lines luv.. always an enjoyment to read u ..
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Date: 4/2/2012 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations Brian on your win...huggsss,deb
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Date: 4/2/2012 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/2/2012 8:57:00 AM
Very nice contempolrary tanka.
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