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Take My Hand

Take my hand.. As we walk in the moonlight.. Our love shines.. Like a diamond .. Please come and take my hand.. As we soar through the sky.. Together you and I.. Take my hand .. So I can take you to paradise.. Where we live together in timeless beauty.. Please, please, please my love.. Don't let me down.. You are deep in my heart.. Never tare us apart.. Take my hand.. Let's dash.. Let's shimmer you and I.. In the moonlight.. So we shine together you and I.. Let's shine together.. Let's soar together .. Up, up, up.. Up above the clouds.. Please take my hand .. We will soar through the sky together.. You and I.. Together in timeless beauty.. Our love is everything.. Our love is all.. Together we are one..

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/18/2018 5:12:00 PM

Robertina, I found myself reaching for your hand as I read this. I'm ready to soar and shine! :) gw

Robertina B.
Date: 10/22/2018 9:02:00 AM

Thank you for your wonderful words, my friend.. Your support has been awesome!! Have a blessed day!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/17/2018 7:59:00 AM

- A poem to love ... beautiful written, Robertina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/14/2018 1:34:00 PM

Beautifully written and comforting. Well done Robertina :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/14/2018 1:28:00 PM

Hi Robertina, such a beautiful lyric with such wonderful love portrayed through your words. Your song flows with emotions notes. A most creative and imaginative song of love. Well done Robertina. Let your heart sing and the words shall ever be gold. May your pen ever run gold. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/8/2018 12:45:00 PM

Very lively write Robertina. Your song moves in style with musical tones and romance. Words of urging, and longing.. delightfully articulated.

Robertina B.
Date: 10/13/2018 7:12:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely words of support, my friend.. Blessings to you!!

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/7/2018 7:58:00 PM

Your beautiful and moving lyric of a deep and passionate love is expressed with the rapture of a true romantic dreamer and ardent soulmate, Robertina. I enjoyed your stunning imagery of burning desire and love. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan

Robertina B.
Date: 10/13/2018 7:12:00 PM

Thank you for your wonderful support and words, dear friend.. Always a pleasure when you visit!! Many blessings, my friend..