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Take Me To a Place

Take me to a place   where they're snowflakes in the air   where we can snuggle by the fire   and make worries disappear     The music will be the backdrop   as my eyes just speak to you   true visions ever beautiful   feelings proclaimed anew     A gentle touch upon your cheek   a kiss or two comply   the heat more than the fire   with time just floating by     Take me to a place   where I can see you bare   romance strips the pretense   removing all our fear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/17/2018 6:49:00 AM
Stunning. Needs more readers. Fav.
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Date: 2/13/2018 5:30:00 PM
Oh this one is so sweet and romantic... again I love it :)
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Date: 2/12/2018 7:19:00 AM
- Outside my window it is; snowflakes in the air :) - Lovely poem, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/11/2018 11:46:00 PM
This is surely a great "Valentines" poem! So romantic.
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Date: 2/10/2018 11:05:00 PM
Dreams take me to that place of embrace that will last forever.
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Date: 2/10/2018 4:05:00 PM
ooh err Tim such beautiful imagery so full of desire:-) hugs jan xx
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