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SWEET ISLAND GIRL

Early morn
Birds still sleep
Crickets warm
Not a peep
Coffee in hand
Dreams are free
Thinking of you
Thinking of me
Last night's prayer 
Has made it here
Rain soaked skies
Begin to clear
And what I see
On distant shore
Sweet Island girl
I long for more
Hear your heart
We are in tune
I love you so 
I'm coming soon

~Lyric Man

Note: This is a write about being homesick for one you love and kind of hoping their homesick too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/21/2018 7:57:00 AM
Nice to read you again. Memories of love, always poignant and beautiful. SuZ
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Date: 7/16/2018 6:29:00 PM
You make the reader wonder what her next prayer would be..If She would listen to her heart..If they'll ever be in tune again..or if their thoughts will wash away,like sad and lonely yesterdays..Such a sweet poem of longing Captain.
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Date: 7/2/2018 2:11:00 PM
Very sweet! :)
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:22:00 PM
So sincere, so sweet, beautiful. I love it.
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Date: 6/12/2018 9:53:00 PM
A beautiful lyric, Chance, of sweet romantic longing expressed with lovely rhythm and rhymes.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/13/2018 7:47:00 AM
Very nice! This is sweet :)
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Date: 5/13/2018 4:05:00 AM
What a beautiful romantic poem, I love lyrics that mention Island girl as I live on a little Island:-) hugs jan xx
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