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Supermoon Eclipse - For Contest

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Oh supermoon looks so huge and pretty Hiding behind the earth just for fun We observe them from both town and city Moon blushes red as the rising sun 09~30~15 Contest: Supermoon Eclipse Sponsored: by Eve Roper Submitted to YOUR BEST QUATRAIN Poetry Contest Sponsored by L Milton Hankins

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/23/2021 11:53:00 AM

You have captured all the wonder of the eclipse in four lines, Jan. Brought those memories back! Congratulations on your win! Hugs and :) 's coming your way.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/22/2021 10:03:00 AM

A beautiful picture. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2015 1:14:00 PM

can't believe I had never seen yours yet, I try so hard to keep current on all your poems, Jan. I really like how you did yours. GREAT rhyming and so cute. congrats, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2015 2:10:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Andrea I have tried extra hard with the Halloween Moon contest too - trying to get that illusive first place lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 10/9/2015 12:32:00 AM

Jan, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2015 4:44:00 AM

Many thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 10/8/2015 3:25:00 PM

Congratulations Jan! Coming back to review a winning poem is pleasurable business:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 10/8/2015 3:46:00 PM

Thanks Paul i am finding it hard writing commenting and responding but trying my best to be active:-) hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2015 3:20:00 PM

Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 10/8/2015 3:45:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 10/7/2015 5:29:00 PM

That's a BIG 7........Congratulations......

Jan Allison
Date: 10/7/2015 5:35:00 PM

Thanks Judy:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 10/7/2015 3:05:00 PM

Jan, thank you so very much for participating in my contest and big congratulations on your win. I loved your last line. Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 10/7/2015 3:14:00 PM

I started with that line and based the poem around it Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 10/2/2015 5:07:00 PM

Being a female, the moon flirts and tempts, being even more effective as it blushes! Both of us tackled this theme in a light-hearted way! hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 10/2/2015 5:11:00 PM

I couldn't go for a serious take on the theme Paul :-) hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 10/1/2015 7:00:00 PM

A very imaginative use of words and skillfully constructed. Emile.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/2/2015 12:02:00 PM

Thanks as ever Emile:-) hugs Jan xx

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/1/2015 5:03:00 PM

Nice portrait of the moon here! Liked the image at the end! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jan Allison
Date: 10/2/2015 12:02:00 PM

Thanks Matthew:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2015 4:05:00 PM

yours is just darn CUTE!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2015 4:29:00 PM

Thanks Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 10/1/2015 3:34:00 PM

Hey Jan after all you pooh poems, I wasn't sure I should look into your Idea of a supermoon, but I'm glad I did,lol---Good Luck as always in this and in Life

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2015 4:29:00 PM

LOL - I hope some of my poems are half decent Jerry:-) hug sjan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/1/2015 11:47:00 AM

Yes, so huge and pretty, like your entry, dear Jean! Beautiful! Good luck!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2015 3:13:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by Demetrios:-) hugs jan xx

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/30/2015 9:32:00 PM

Sweet and pretty, pretty and sweet, a lovely word package tied up so neat! I enjoyed it ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2015 1:54:00 AM

Thanks so much CayCay:-)hugs jan xx

Michael Tor

Date: 9/30/2015 5:19:00 PM

Very nice Jan. Enjoyed reading. Wonderful entry.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/30/2015 5:20:00 PM

Thanks Michael I appreciate your continued support:-) hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/30/2015 4:00:00 PM

Ahh!! Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 9/30/2015 4:10:00 PM

Thanks Sara:-) hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/30/2015 3:31:00 PM

Awesome subject and your poem did it justice with your lighthearted touch, has a sig-song quality I can almost sing this ditty:-))) All the best! hugs!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/30/2015 3:38:00 PM

I hadn't planned for both lines to rhyme but that is the way it ended up and it is also shown on the example on soup so I hope its correct lol:-) hugs Jan x

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/30/2015 2:48:00 PM

- This is our beautiful moon ..... a wonderful poem,Jan :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/30/2015 3:07:00 PM

My son stayed up to see the eclipse - the sky was so so clear here that night - the images I have seen on the web have been breathtaking. I missed it and got up at 4am but the stars were spectacular so bright and visible it was a wonderful sight:-) hugs Jan x

Tim Smith

Date: 9/30/2015 2:12:00 PM

A beautiful picture Jan. The moon is being coy. Love your take.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/30/2015 2:14:00 PM

Oh yes hiding and blushing lol - I started this with the blushing idea as soon as i saw the contest I just needed to work round the rest of it:-) hugs Jan xx