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Sunsets of Sadness

I remember the springtime of my first write The butterfly contest when my words took flight The friends that have come and gone Leaving their poems to live on There are sunsets of sadness When the ink no longer flows Starry skies will have no twinkle When the muse no longer glows But what of goodbyes if tears begin to fall What of old friends lost between the lines Found only when memories come to call With metaphors abandoned on the sidelines 7-19 -2020 If this was my Last Poetry Contest Poem Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 8/22/2020 9:13:00 AM
This is a brilliant write - - congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest, truly deserved. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/28/2020 11:40:00 AM
A touching muse of parting emotions yet beautifully penned Joseph. Congratulations on your win my friend. Blessings :)
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Date: 7/26/2020 5:26:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/26/2020 4:06:00 AM
Beautiful lines ~Starry skies will have no twinkle When the muse no longer glows.. But seemingly sad .. Congratulations on your placement sir.:-) Keep inspiring.Warmest regards~Deepa
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Date: 7/26/2020 2:55:00 AM
That is a great title and deep take on the contest.. How ironic, PS was down and this could have been the last contest for me! Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Date: 7/22/2020 4:07:00 PM
There would be "sunsets of sadness" if your words ceased to caress the sky. Your thoughts wrap around my heart and hold me close. ~ Brandy
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Joseph May
Date: 7/22/2020 4:49:00 PM
Thank you Brandy, Glad I held you close with my words
Date: 7/22/2020 6:44:00 AM
Brilliant and sad at the same time, well pointed out, Joseph:)
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Joseph May
Date: 7/22/2020 4:47:00 PM
Thank you Jo..
Date: 7/22/2020 1:13:00 AM
Love this, Joseph, the poetry is superb, so is the sentiment, and the point...
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Joseph May
Date: 7/22/2020 4:47:00 PM
Thank you Harry
Date: 7/19/2020 3:00:00 PM
Sadness indeed--when ink no longer flows--the last stanza is stunning, Joseph.
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Joseph May
Date: 7/19/2020 7:04:00 PM
Thank you Vijay
Date: 7/19/2020 2:55:00 PM
You are staying my friend for you are an inspiration on soup -this is for a contest and so will the next and the one after and so on, a brilliant clever write. Good luck in the contest! Blessings Joseph Jennifer
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Joseph May
Date: 7/19/2020 7:03:00 PM
Thank you so much Jennifer
Date: 7/19/2020 10:54:00 AM
I like how you wrote this poem. Making us think of many people's last poems to be seen :)
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Joseph May
Date: 7/19/2020 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Heidi

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