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Sunrise Eyes

~ Sweetly flows the morning breeze so softly past your sunrise eyes A’ flutter through the yawning trees in silhouette these dawning skies Where pastel ribbons filter through my windswept dreams in endless play Now whispering my love for you upon this warm September day ~

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/10/2019 4:12:00 PM

"Vintage Chris Green." Simply and elegantly -- lovely! Thanks, Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 5:14:00 PM

Thanks my friend. I appreciate your kind words always.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2019 3:00:00 PM

simply beautiful, Chris

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 3:43:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/10/2019 1:49:00 PM

- Beautifully described through romantic eyes, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 2:46:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/10/2019 12:54:00 PM

Quite beautiful and a soothing read. Well done.

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 1:02:00 PM

Thank you again my friend. I appreciate your visit today

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/10/2019 11:27:00 AM

I feel calmed by reading this delicate piece.

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 1:01:00 PM

Thanks so very much Richard. I am thrilled you enjoyed it.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/10/2019 10:19:00 AM

your muse always amazes me with the romance that falls...beautiful write my friend :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 10:26:00 AM

Thank you so much Sandy. Good morning my friend.

Lu Loo

Date: 9/10/2019 9:56:00 AM

simply beautiful...:)-luloo

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 10:15:00 AM

Thank you so much.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/10/2019 9:35:00 AM

To live through your eyes of cotton candy dreams and pastel ribboned skies!

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 9:43:00 AM

Must be these rose colored glasses I am wearing. : ) Thank you again my friend.

John Hamilton

Date: 9/10/2019 9:19:00 AM

I love this Chris, yawning trees, dawning skies, you could give lessons of imagery, I would never imagine using these words together yet when you use it it all makes sense. You are definitely one of a few fave writers here. Don't ever go away again ok?

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 9:25:00 AM

What a nice thing to say to me, thank you so much my friend. I truly appreciate your kindness and your friendship. I will do my best to stick around for a while. Thank you again.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/10/2019 9:01:00 AM

Good Morning Chris...a beautifully penned poem for your love in windswept dreams.

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 9:15:00 AM

Good morning Jeanne. Thank you for bringing a smile to me this morning

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/10/2019 8:47:00 AM

This was so sweetly written! See you still can make me wake with a smile on my face!;) See when I grow up I want to write just like you! Lol!;) for real! Lol!

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 9:14:00 AM

Ha, your poetry sure does look like grown up poetry to me. : ) Thank you Brenda for all of your kind words

Hello There

Date: 9/10/2019 8:29:00 AM

This poem really made me smile ~ a morning pick-me-up, for sure. I think it will be an afternoon and evening pick-me-up as well ~ so very light, loving, and uplifting :)

Hello There
Date: 9/10/2019 3:17:00 PM

Back for a quick fix ~ Just as lovely the second time through! A fave, for sure!

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 8:34:00 AM

I can't ask for than that, can I? : ) Thank you so much my friend, I may refer back again to your wonderful comment for the same reasons.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/10/2019 8:03:00 AM

Your positive poetry is both inspiring and peaceful. Very nice Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 8:15:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. Good morning my friend.