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Sunlight In a Room

I see a doorway to another room Direct from the room I’m currently in The room is delightful just to begin There is bright sunlight on the walls in tune I bask in the light as it is brought soon Brought in a feeling of warmth without sin Tenderness is love to all those within And that room forms the greatest magic rune This room carries love, uniquely seen sight It carry’s beauty just like robust art Now I enter this gorgeous room of light Transfixed onto the perfect summer heart I find the room is fit for the greatest It holds all the joy that’s of the latest Russell Sivey One of my very few attempts at an Italian Sonnets.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2013 6:37:00 PM

I love your theme of a sunlit room, Russell. They are so much nicer than darkened or shadowy rooms. Good first Italian sonnet!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/14/2013 12:56:00 PM

this compoition is amazing, russell. I love the imagery, the deep feeling and thought put into it... beautifully written and very touching like a sunlight fondling.. enjoyed!..:) huggs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/14/2013 9:53:00 AM

Good morning Russell, a nice Italian Sonnet. beauty when light is reaching in like magic... xox...Linda

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/14/2013 7:48:00 AM

I'm not familiar with this form but I do like what you have written here.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/14/2013 5:45:00 AM

Great work..Enjoyed reading this one today..It made me want to enter the sunroom and sit a spell with a blanket and coffee..Thanks for the visit to my page..I have finished "When Winter Comes"..Sara