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Sunflower Strove With Hollyhock

Sunflower Strove with Hollyhock (After Donald Justice "First Death") Sunflower maize and pink-on-stalk two plants rising toward the sun-- a sunflower strives with hollyhock. Past noonday hour at one o'clock, no birds sing--no, not one. Sunflower maize and pink-on -stalk aglow in sunny noonday shock compete where streams of silver run. The sunflower strives with hollyhock in grasses nicely cleared of rock where other strivings now are done. Sunflower maize and pink-on-stalk both dressed in nature's modest frock don't seem to know they've both won; the sunflower strives with hollyhock. So wide it grows in front to block the sun--her grace it hopes to shun-- sunflower maize blocks pink-on-stalk. The sunflower strives with hollyhock.

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Date: 6/21/2021 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations Carol on your winning poem. A masterpiece of originality in content and colorful in its imagery
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 6/21/2021 4:50:00 PM
Thank you, Frances. I'm so glad you liked my poem.
Date: 3/28/2021 7:33:00 PM
A delightful villanelle, Carol! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 3/26/2021 10:28:00 AM
Dear Carol, my heart’s imagination delights in the breathtaking beauty, charm and rhymes of your poem. The sunflower and the hollyhock strive in lush poetic fervor. I admire your poetic phrasing and adore you amazing imagery. Warmest wishes, my talented friend.. ~Susan
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