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Sun in - Sun out

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Sun in - Sun out

 Extreme Sunset


Brimstones past the clouds 
Highlight against the ocean line
Beautiful sunset, warm texture
Warning, the rooster's asleep!

Glorious yellow and orange mixture 
My source of great inspiration
Unmatch - beauty mark In the sky
The horizon is ready for nightfall 


 ~*~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 6/28/2016 5:17:00 PM
I admire anyone who can describe something a new way that is unique to them. Regards David from NZ
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Date: 6/28/2016 4:10:00 PM
Another one that I really like, Skat. I wonder if there are some of these I have seen more than three times now!
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Date: 10/28/2015 7:55:00 AM
Beautiful.Like it.
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Date: 7/5/2015 2:26:00 PM
Really short and sweet. You made a great mental picture here with nice word choices. Thanks for this read.
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Date: 3/29/2015 8:20:00 PM
I saw this as a winner before reading comments below congratulating you on it winning! A7 and awesome deep and creative poetry.
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Date: 3/27/2015 9:11:00 AM
Amazing imagery.. Love it!
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Date: 3/12/2015 1:38:00 PM
Lovely image in my head
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Date: 2/21/2015 6:06:00 PM
Brimstone and a burning wind
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Date: 2/1/2015 3:53:00 PM
SKAT A, I love the element of surprise in the last line of each verse! Very awesome piece with blazing imagery! Pandita.
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Date: 12/1/2014 2:11:00 AM
nice. many images from nature and the sky come to mind here. :)
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Date: 6/12/2014 9:14:00 PM
Beautiful my dearest girl, love how light this is i'm thinking I need to do something light and easy such as you've done here. I wonder what you have inspired tonight lol one never knows dearest of hearts where this may lead me. But it would have started by your muse above. cheri
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Date: 4/22/2014 5:44:00 PM
skat you should rework this one somehow for the red moon contest I still love it.
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Date: 4/17/2014 2:54:00 AM
Hi Skat...stopped here to read one of your poems in exchange for Dracula visit!!:) (only following sis's instructions!!) Glad I did though...the imagery here is great...so is the whole write :) cu // paul
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Date: 4/11/2014 10:31:00 PM
THANK YOU ANDREA :) SKAT
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Date: 4/11/2014 9:53:00 PM
hot win... linda
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Date: 4/11/2014 1:40:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win in: "Itty Bitty" contest, Skat !! (My poem was so itty bitty that it dropped out of the contest :))) - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/11/2014 8:41:00 AM
Congrats on your win Skat
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Date: 4/10/2014 10:50:00 PM
this was very nice, Skat. Like I told Tim, I put the good ones that forgot to put itty bitty in the title line down here. Others did not make the list at all. congrats in my contest. Your poem rocked.
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Date: 3/12/2014 10:32:00 AM
Beautiful...I saw it on the coast of Bay of Bengal...Best wishes from India...
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Date: 2/19/2014 1:36:00 PM
Hey Kat, this is subway67. I'm not too familiar with how this site works, so I'm sending you a message via comments. Thanks for your comment and friendly, warm welcome to poetrysoup. I will have to figure this site out. Red Sun is very liberating. Let myself float away with it. Thanks again for your post.
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Date: 2/1/2014 7:04:00 AM
Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice imagery...Where is this place SKAT, I'd love to take my "Valentine" there and picnic 'tll this glorious sunrise...smile, Robert
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Date: 1/7/2014 4:30:00 PM
Love the imagery here :) the yellows...oranges...soft reds...marvelous really ~ Sam
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Date: 11/26/2013 7:14:00 PM
Just got around to reading this and was blessed by its great beauty. Thanks for arranging the words in such a pleasing way.
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Date: 10/27/2013 9:12:00 AM
Excellent imagery here. Your poem is an utter delight to peruse. Love...Mustapha.
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Date: 10/26/2013 8:18:00 PM
I can see the red sky. Beautiful poem. Best wishes Linda x
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