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Summer Tides

warmth of evening lake bathes our eyes in summer tides as August awaits the closing of moon's flowers... we release our farewell kiss ---------- For Nathan’s Tanka (Season) Contest by nette onclaud

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/25/2012 11:09:00 AM

Glad that I chose this winner to read today..I do like those moon flowers..Congrats..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2012 3:33:00 PM

romantic and beautiful, Nette. Congrats in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/24/2012 3:27:00 PM

Contest results .... you won, congratulations. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2012 6:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/24/2012 12:16:00 AM

CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS SUNNY SUMMER TIDES WRITE ..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/23/2012 6:53:00 PM

HI NETTE,,,, CONGRATULATIONS !!! :-) enjoyed your wonderful poem in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest... take care~xox~PD

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/21/2012 7:03:00 PM

this is beautiful...i was drawn in by the title...glad i read it...great poem!

Spandan Karmakar

Date: 10/17/2012 5:50:00 AM

A wondurful tanka by you Net loved this one very much........spandan.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 10/16/2012 9:42:00 PM

Well I'll vote for this one to win,,,, have a great day Nette ;}

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/16/2012 7:23:00 PM

You create a wonderful scene with this tanka--lovely imagery. love phyl

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/16/2012 3:13:00 PM

very lovely!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/16/2012 1:07:00 PM

SO SO PRETTY NETTE LUV .. A LITTLE SAD TO SEE SUMMER TIDES WAVW GOODBYE AND OH THOSE MOON FLOWERS .. DELIGHTFUL AROMA .. SENDING WINNING WISHES TO U ..

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/16/2012 11:57:00 AM

A stunning scene like only you can paint Nette, all the best for the contest ;) *hugs* Wilma

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/16/2012 6:54:00 AM

Yes! I absolutely love this my friend! I can feel the end of summer near with this incredible write! You have brought upon the ending the start of Autumn to bring...eventually soon that is! I really enjoyed this delightful piece that you've so illustriously brought forth for me to absorb in its fullness! "The closing of moon's flowers..." beautifully crafted line, I just love it! Wonderful piece, Great Work!!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/16/2012 2:19:00 AM

Beautiful Nette. All the best for the contest.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 10/16/2012 1:58:00 AM

Beautiful Tanka, nette, closing of moon's flowers is liked much,.. feel honored that you are asking for something new from me, come, visit, there is one just for u, hurriedly made, tho!!:) jag

Kash Poet

Date: 10/16/2012 1:21:00 AM

Wonderful tanka here Nette.Not received your soupmail.Send a freash soupmail.Donot send it from soupmail's reply option.It's not working.

Kash Poet
Date: 10/16/2012 1:21:00 AM

Fresh ....

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/15/2012 11:51:00 PM

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