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Summer Sundae Color

Milk drip slid pooled lake lick languish Cirus segments slice sour anguish Berries bowl buried, sandwiched Split banana smiles skinless raw Pokes ice topped mountains tongues adore Indulged inhibition, law Melt pulp passionfruit volcano Delish disallows you say no Seed sea syrup sweet halo Sundae dips silky mango dice Cubes correspond smooth cream entice Twang of mandarin comes twice 15th January 2021 Written for Rob Levassuer's Contest Seasonal Attention To Detail Syllables 8 - 8 - 7

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Date: 1/19/2021 7:52:00 PM
Wow, that's some hot twang of mandarin, Ingrid. Must we wait for summer to share that Sundae? ~Eric
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Date: 1/15/2021 6:29:00 AM
Your a very naughty girl Sigrid, or maybe I’m a naughty boy, either way this one is absolutely decadently immersive, attention to detail, only a true connoisseur would know about, best of luck in the contest, cheers David
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David Kavanagh
Date: 1/17/2021 6:33:00 AM
I scream no way,
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 1/16/2021 3:09:00 PM
.... No brain freeze for you, Ice cream Irish Gorgeous Boy...

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