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One night, I'm lying in bed gazing at a starlit sky. And sorting wandering thoughts, while watching the clouds drift by. Suddenly: I'm terrified, I sense malevolent hate. And when my door squeaks open, all my neck hairs stand up straight. I heard some staggered footsteps, made by no creature I knew. But I'm paralyzed by fear, and there’s nothing I can do. Terrorized by its approach, I prayed, God, keep it away. For I’m awake, but can't move, not one muscle will obey. Something jumped onto my bed, the weight of a cat or rat. And frightened out of my wits, I prayed it was just a cat. But, then it stood on two legs, for I felt each step it took. And it walked up my leg, so close, still, I couldn't look. I thought my heart would explode, as panic swept over me. But then, it retraced its steps and left, though I didn’t see. I've heard tales of these things though there's nothing I can prove. But the instant it was gone, my fear fled, and I could move. (Quatrain) 2/21/2017

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Date: 12/31/2021 10:30:00 AM
Now that's scary! I believe there are all kinds of things that go bump in the dark ~ I'm just not sure I want to know what they are! Really good, scary write :)
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Date: 12/31/2021 1:24:00 PM
Thanks, Ann, yes it was scary and I never did find out what it was, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/30/2021 4:58:00 PM
This seemed a bit too real!!!! Congrats on placement!
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Date: 12/30/2021 8:04:00 PM
Thanks, Robert, It remains the scariest thing I've ever experienced, and till this day is still unexplained my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/29/2021 10:56:00 AM
Well, if you will have a pet squirrel monkey ;-) Seriously, Emile, I see from your reply’s that this happened for real…. Now that’s SPOOKY! Congrats on your win. Terry
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Date: 12/29/2021 11:53:00 AM
Thanks, Terry, yes this happened when I was about 16 and I can tell you, it was very frightening, my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/25/2017 5:57:00 PM
such vivid imagery Emile I found the ending quite chilling! Great descriptive write:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/26/2017 9:54:00 AM
Thanks Jan, this is a true story and it was a chilling experience to say the least, I appreciated you comments, Emile.
Date: 2/21/2017 5:38:00 PM
This is great, Emile. I like the fact that you left us in suspense:) GREAT WRITE!!!
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Date: 2/22/2017 8:10:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, I appreciated you comments, Emile.

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