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It was a sunny day, i remember going to a bay. Holding my fathers hand , i remember walking in the sand. I remember the day, like it was yesterday. But never would that memory be true again. coz i have come too far away. leaving the tender relations far behind. In order to achieve success. Now successful i turn back . only to find no one to share my success, I ran after success, without knowing that the greatest success is having some one close by.

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Date: 8/26/2013 4:47:00 AM
So you have a vague memory of going for fishing.... A~D :)
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 8/26/2013 5:01:00 AM
DONT REMEMBER CATCHING ANY THOUGH

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