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Sub-atomic particles the atoms they form molecules, cell organelles cells, machinery of life organs, organisms communities and ecosystems planets, solar systems, galaxies galactic clusters and their inverse black holes the doors to other universes, a contradiction in terms. For language and its shadow consciousness must hold matter the material world snugly inside concepts theories and hypotheses to be experimentally verified using vision and the other senses, collecting data and interpreting the known facts accumulated over time. Can matter exist without a consciousness to behold it? Believing in our mortality (the species) we have created God (a supreme being) probably not carbon-based to encompass every universe but is God inside or outside consciousness? Can God tell us what to do or must we tell God alone what to do? Here is ego projecting personality, exerting force on community, asserting the existence and predominance of component DNA. An already hackneyed theory that DNA survival drives procreation, personality, savings bonds everything but poetry (most poems included). Mustache, cowboy hat horse whisperer, gulag master Odysseus, King Lear salvation in the details. Yes, these personalities individual and interesting as opossum, bear oak and ash beech nut, pine cone Grand Canyon sandstone, Green Mountain granite.

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