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Haiku 48-54 Strolling along Palm beach

palm trees silhouette against ocean's pastel hues sunset's soft glow misty horizon oceans seperate his palm from my tear my floating sandal- tumbling waves break upon the shore floating bubbles before i tossed my pebble dad breaks wind at sea waves lilt upon the sand coloured corals crunch between our toes low tide dawn's golden shimmer reveals a coral reef the tempest a lone ship fades in the mist not for the contest but tnks Heather Ober and participating friends for the ocean haiku inspiration

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Date: 2/16/2014 11:29:00 PM
I really enjoyed this journey. I feel like I just returned from vacation! Well done!! You know this is going into my favs!!Asavvy1
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Date: 1/20/2014 9:19:00 AM
I have a sudden urge to book a vacation. I just love the ocean.
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Date: 7/3/2013 12:44:00 PM
Thank you offering me this walk....while reading! LOVE this set of Haiku.
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Date: 6/27/2013 9:32:00 AM
In this one post you have shown more haikus than I have written in more than a year..... and all of them are quality creations.... Jake
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Date: 6/15/2013 9:49:00 PM
Soup mail.
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Keith Simmonds
Date: 6/17/2013 4:48:00 AM
These are beautiful beach haiku, Charmaine! I love the visual impact created here! Watch your spelling, though!
Date: 6/15/2013 9:48:00 PM
You always paint beautiful scenes with your poetry! I enjoyed this very much sister much love from me to you <3- Edward
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Date: 5/20/2013 10:05:00 AM
Fabulous haiku as always. Your last one there is chillingly good. I like them all though; couldn't pick a favourite. ~I got the subtle little hint in your last comment. I'm working on it. Thanks a million for your committed devotion to my humble work. See you around like a donut!
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Date: 5/20/2013 6:42:00 AM
Hi Charma!
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Date: 5/17/2013 4:39:00 PM
Sweer short tales of the seashore here! Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/12/2013 9:32:00 AM
Well you seem to have been crazy inspired by the Oceanku contest (whether or not you actually participated in it). These were fantastic! The five-year-old in me is drawn towards the fourth one... about your dad "breaking wind"... LOL! Though the last one is definitely the most traditional... keeping to the short and concise side of haiku. It's a good skill to have... thanks for sharing these little gems!
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Date: 5/11/2013 11:43:00 PM
wow, Charma, and are you asking us our favorites when you say or or or? I can tell you the best one for me is the second. It creates a unique visual. I like all the rest very much and found the breaking wind one to be hilarious.
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Date: 4/22/2013 7:18:00 AM
Charma, spectacular as always!...I got a laugh out of number 4. :)
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Date: 4/21/2013 6:01:00 AM
- They are all well written Charma .... but if I got to pick one - I choose: number one! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/20/2013 9:54:00 AM
'coloured corals crunch', such vivid alliterations! Very evocative of being with the ocean, really good. Have a lovely rest of the weekend, Charmaine. ~Jeremy
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Date: 4/20/2013 3:11:00 AM
Excellent. Good haiku. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 4/20/2013 2:18:00 AM
Very good set of haiku here Charma.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 4/19/2013 7:48:00 PM
Oh wow..........these are so wonderful....and unique. I love the idea of the floating sandal....who would be so clever? What great haikus!
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Date: 4/19/2013 9:59:00 AM
Give me a good beach & crashing waves any day. This was heart-warming, to say the least.
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Date: 4/19/2013 9:44:00 AM
Charma! You are an incredibly talented haiku writer!!! There are a few spots left in my contest - You should pick one of these to enter. I especially love the one about your floating sandal! :)
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Date: 4/19/2013 8:46:00 AM
a buffet of fine 'kus which makes me dizzy with pleasure.. i like all, C... glad to read you again.. missed ya!..:)
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