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Stream of Life

Sparkling water tumbling down Effervescent in beauty Reminds me of purity Spotless, untainted. Kids mother, my lovely mate, Sailing down the stream of life, Responsibly and caring, Family and me. Raising our children with love, Caring for their well being. Clean clothing, good meals prepared, They know they are loved. Lissome and charming is she, Earning our children’s respect. She is beautiful in our eyes, Spotless, untainted.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/26/2011 9:12:00 PM
Congratulations on you fine 2nd Place win in John's Contest, James. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:20:00 AM
Congrats James on your wonderful win in John's contest with a super entry.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 2/25/2011 10:27:00 AM
I am glad you enjoyed the challenge James! Oh no, don't ever give up, many people have some very important communication to give the world, that only needs time to ferment in the heart. Congratulations again on your worthy poem's honored second place. Agape, MOses
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on this excellent poem placing 2nd in John's contest James. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2011 11:55:00 PM
oh, and I see this just won in the contest too. Congrats. I had just seen this winner the other day!
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Date: 2/24/2011 6:31:00 PM
Extremely happy to see you at the top James. Congratulations on your worthy poem's second place honor, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/23/2011 11:16:00 PM
She is very beautiful on that stream of life.
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Date: 2/23/2011 7:34:00 AM
You have a pleasant stream of life, God bless you, James
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