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Strange Looks

Think I'll write about l'il birdies and pretty flowers Look up at the sky of blue and dream for hours Then the damn alarm goes off And all the prettiness is lost My heart carries on, but strange looks I encounter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/11/2017 4:29:00 AM
Yes, those looks are from your significant other saying, "what were you doing in your sleep?" LOL! This is such a beautifully written limerick my friend! I really enjoyed reading your skillfully drawn poem this morning! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/11/2017 6:56:00 AM
Unfortunately, as soon as I awake, can't remember them! As I was enjoying them so!!!
Date: 9/10/2017 8:35:00 AM
Don't be alarmed, it's only the day//Saying, "Hey Jack! Come out and play//And write some sillies//Make 'em some dillies//rise and shine boy, watta ya say?" GOOD MORNING JAKE the SNAKE!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/10/2017 10:18:00 AM
82 and still cookin'!!!! GOOD GOOD MORNING. JOHN JOHN!!!

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