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Still falls the snow- White is my world, white is my soul- Lost in a storm of filigree snowflakes Swirling and twirling. Still falls the snow With a whisper like a Mozart Symphony- Beat The crescendo, and the waltz Swirling and twirling: Still falls the snow It mingles with the blood dripping from my pen Dripping Dripping Dripping All my tears entwine with each perfect snowflake. Still falls the snow At the feet of this girl- of sorrow And although I love the frozen kisses, I scream Oh, go away snow- Oh, go away frozen world- It is in the golden sunshine, that is where- I want to be. ___________________________ March 11, 2017 Poetry/Verse/Still Falls The Snow Copyright Protected, ID 17- 883-601-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Any Poem Written In March, Not For A Contest, sponsor, Laura Loo First Place

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Date: 4/10/2017 8:31:00 PM
Love the image of the dance with your emotions congratulations on your win :-)
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Date: 4/10/2017 2:09:00 PM
This made me silent, the beauty of your poem is overwhelming. So well deserved 1st place! Congratulations.
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Date: 4/10/2017 12:34:00 PM
Congratulations Constance on your chilling victory...
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Date: 4/10/2017 9:54:00 AM
Oh, this is so beautiful! I love how you used the repetition of "still falls the snow". Congrats on your top win!
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Date: 4/10/2017 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations sweet poet, a stirring write here. Love and hugs xomo
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Date: 4/10/2017 7:54:00 AM
still falls the snow...what a perfect picture image painted...the layout makes it all that much better. Lovely poem from a lovely lady:) thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 3/13/2017 11:34:00 AM
I hope, that the blood melts with the snow as well, when the sunshine comes. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 3/12/2017 6:33:00 AM
Excellent and beautiful poem. Very imagery write. Summer is coming soon. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 3/11/2017 11:35:00 PM
Yes, Constance - this is the month for feeling that way! : )
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Date: 3/11/2017 4:14:00 PM
I miss the snow dear poet, moved away from it 40 years ago, 50 below to 80 above, in golden sunshine of which you speak.. your poem says it correctly, snow is still and quiet.. in my memory I can still hear the crunch of each step taken in warm boots..thank you for allowing me to journey back from reading your poem
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Date: 3/11/2017 10:42:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Constance! Love the imagery and you are an artist at formatting your poems. They always come out looking so decorative and inviting. Blessings, Kim
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