Stars Above

When Luna strolls across the sky Then Venus follows and lovers sigh Then stars above delight to shine And hearts then glow with love divine ~ 1-15-2020 When and Then Contest Sponsor: Jenish Somadas

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/24/2020 8:48:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2020 8:06:00 PM

yayyy, you scored well. Congratulations

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/23/2020 1:38:00 PM

- Well deserved, Joseph :) - Congratulations ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/23/2020 10:28:00 AM

Congratulations Joseph , a cute poem, and very loving. Blessings, Jennifer.

Michael Craig

Date: 1/23/2020 10:18:00 AM

Very lovely poem. Greatly written. - Joseph

Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/23/2020 7:05:00 AM

Your poem is really a delight to read.. Congrats on your great win and thank you for participating in the contest.

Joseph May
Date: 1/23/2020 1:16:00 PM

Thank you for my placement Jenish..

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/22/2020 5:11:00 PM

Beautiful, good luck in the contest.

Joseph May

Date: 1/22/2020 2:14:00 PM

My thanks to everyone who commented, or will comment, your comments are much appreciated..

Paul Callus

Date: 1/21/2020 3:23:00 PM

Short but delightful, Joseph. Love and romance are in the air. Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/21/2020 2:01:00 PM

- Beautiful written, Joseph :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2020 3:01:00 PM

Back at this one again. I can't wait to see the winners. this was such a great prompt. Also I like Silent One's latest prompt!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/20/2020 8:16:00 AM

How cute Joseph, romance in the air and a win for sure! Blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/17/2020 11:56:00 AM

Just lovely, Joseph! … and now morphing it into a seasonal quintain, the fifth line might be: Will you be my valentine. Smiles, Gershon

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/16/2020 9:51:00 PM

:) Your thoughts make my heart smile. This is so beautiful, dreamy and romantic. Sweet moments touch the sky. :) Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2020 8:35:00 PM

so sweet. Gosh, the contest does not look hard. I really need to look at this one quickly before it fills.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/16/2020 6:56:00 AM

Beautiful--romantic--well done, Joseph.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/15/2020 10:41:00 PM

You have written a glowing poem Joseph, I can see the after glow of this image, thank you for sharing, have a great evening.