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Staring At An End

Lost, on a shattered plain of existence Counting vultures circling over head Naming them to make them seem familiar Friends with black wings Looking down Screaming across the valley High pitched warnings Feedback off of dark clouds Lying here alone…once again alone Wondering what I could have or should have said Or shouldn’t have said Sifting the waters of my mind Searching for that one gold nugget That last shining piece of hope That I can hold in my hands But it is not there I ruined it, I ruined everything Once again my stupidity stakes it claim Right through my heart And my feathered friends are getting closer Lower, a hungry expression on their faces Drooling at the thought And I point and yell There is nothing here Nothing left Just an empty soul Staring at an end

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Date: 10/22/2016 7:21:00 AM
Impacting sentiments circle round, like vultures awaiting rotted carcasses and hopelessness. You aptly paint emotions like no other Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2016 8:25:00 AM
Thanks so very much Paloma, sometimes that is exactly how it feels.

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