Stargazing

pounding drums echo rising upon painted hills where sitting subdued lost in the virgin canvas I sketch one star's loving glow

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2017 7:50:00 PM

Beautiful, Rick. I came to see the trophy poem AND wish you a merry christmas!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 12/22/2017 11:08:00 PM

BIG CONGRATS to win top.

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/22/2017 10:26:00 PM

How delightful to focus on that one special star in the sky. Love the imagery. Well done, Rick. Congrats on your win.

Douglas Brown

Date: 12/22/2017 10:36:00 AM

Great!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/22/2017 10:06:00 AM

This is beautiful, Rick! CONGRATS! Janice

Mark Martin

Date: 4/20/2017 2:45:00 PM

This conjures a great image in my mind's eye! Congratulations on your win Rick! :-)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/20/2017 11:02:00 AM

Wow ! Rick , wonderful peace congratulations on your win

White Wolf

Date: 4/18/2017 8:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Rick.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2017 6:02:00 PM

Wow, Fantastic, Rick. Sure wish I had time to visit more of your poems. I see you have a number of short forms . I will check them out. I want to find the ones you gave at your contest page, at least the ones that looked most interesting to me!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/14/2017 8:30:00 PM

Love it. I love watching the stars when I am out in the desert or the mountains. Good luck in the contest!

The Grahamburglar

Date: 4/13/2017 10:02:00 PM

I love this. It reminds me that I need to go camping. It's about that time of year. 7 from this guy. -G