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Spring-A Rondel

Spring Rain falls Roses burst blooming Gardens all need grooming in Spring

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John Monteblanco

Date: 2/16/2010 12:59:00 PM

Um.... I don't know what to say because everything has already been said. So all I can say is AWESOME poem!!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/3/2010 8:19:00 PM

Audrey, I visualize a beautiful spring with these images in your lovely Cinquain. I hope it does well in the contest. I have never written one before. Blessings, Connie

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/28/2010 8:24:00 AM

This is such a happy spring cinquain, any reader would enjoy the "spring-y" images it evokes :) Best of luck in the contest, Audrey :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/27/2010 9:19:00 AM

So glad u enjoyed my poetry today Audrey... your awesome comments always make me feel like writing more and more.. just luv your flair for words... thankxxx for being a dear friend.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Elaine George

Date: 1/27/2010 9:09:00 AM

Lovely Cinquain, dear Audrey. Thank you for sharing your lovely poetry with me today. Love, Lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 1/27/2010 8:10:00 AM

Have Soupmailed you as requested Aufrey.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/27/2010 3:50:00 AM

Nicely written Rondel short and to the point. Keep the creative pen flowing. Should be in the winner's circle. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/26/2010 7:36:00 PM

Great words and title Audrey... hope u have entered it in Brian's contest... great write .. and Spring cannot come fast enough for this beach baby... my entry into Carol's contest for Spring is... Softy Springing.. thankxxx for your wonderful comments as always on my poetry.. much appreciated... luv.. blessings.. Linda-Marie..

Margaret Foster

Date: 1/26/2010 7:30:00 PM

Audrey You bring a nice refreshing touch to this hot summer day down here. I water the roses early morning before the heat. the grooming will have to wait for cooler weather....:) well written...cheers Margaret

Marty Owens

Date: 1/26/2010 12:36:00 PM

I love the roses to burst forth but I don't like the grooming!!! Enjoyed...Marty

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2010 12:27:00 PM

Very cute!! So is it your entry in the contest? Luv ya, Andrea

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/26/2010 12:15:00 PM

new poem posted

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/26/2010 9:09:00 AM

YES , Audrey , Hoe ; Hoe : Hoe . Best of luck in the contest ....

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/26/2010 4:20:00 AM

A little "grooming" can help us all, Audrey, and in springtime it's a must for the conscientious gardener. Enjoyed the way you developed this cinquain into a magnificent rondel. Love, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/26/2010 3:33:00 AM

Audrey, I can hardly wait for spring! I "missed" gardening last year due to my hip. Now that I have a new one, I am hoping to be totally recovered so I can spring into action and plant, plant, plant by March. (Recover is going well.) I love this cinquain. Smiles, Dane

Bojosi Ditshwele

Date: 1/25/2010 11:29:00 PM

It is always exiting when spring is coming, how the vegetation brings beauty to the land, those aromatic and glorious roses and all those other things, but for some of us, well autumn is on the way. Good poem for the spring season and thanx for your warm comments