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Spellbound

Spellbound Marshmallow melting in hot chocolate Is my stomach when you are near. A humming bird's wings, as it plunders a plant, Is my heart, when you hold my hand. Your presence assaults my very senses. The sight, the sound and scent of you fill me with desire. The taste, and the touch of you, is my reward. I am utterly under your spell. Contest 'Breathtaking Love' sponsored by A Rambling Poet 11th May 2010

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Kash Poet

Date: 8/28/2011 9:51:00 AM

after joinin the site in last Nov. i discovered you today only...

Kash Poet

Date: 8/28/2011 9:47:00 AM

Breathtaking indeed!A new fav poet for me.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/25/2010 9:05:00 PM

you compared it with such simple things yet the effects they have are breathtaking indeed--congrats on your win with this, Margaret :)

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/18/2010 8:51:00 AM

Congrats on your 5th Place win in the contest, Margaret! Very nice! ....Jimmy

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 6:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Breathtaking Love" Margaret. Love, Carol

Ray Dillard

Date: 5/16/2010 8:14:00 PM

A very nicely written Love Poem. Congratulations, and thanks for taking time to comment. She did like the poem, by the way! RAY

Rick Parise

Date: 5/16/2010 7:59:00 PM

Congrats Margaret, A very nice tribute to your love~rick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/16/2010 5:15:00 PM

Congrats Margaret on your winning poem in this wonderful contest.. lovely lines to earn u another great win.. enjoy.. luv .. Linda-Marie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2010 7:22:00 AM

I really like ths yummy write,Margaret. Now this one I think you did exactly what Constance expects!! She does like a more free verse style, so i think you can do really well in her contest with this little gem! Luv, Andrea