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Speed On the Dangerous Lane

A hasty travel, carrying with it violence’s hue From the sky, helicopter follows the dangerous view From the up, the ground is littered with scattered crates Observing this run closely to ensure there aren’t any secrets No other option and it’s too late to hide Flying on wheels entering corners void of a guide So much adrenaline moves and constantly gives an itch as high gears interchange in a regular switch. Steering commanding the road with no grace sirens on its dangerous execution they face. Hurt on anyone around, accident proclaims daring the road to put traffic in flames. Criminals on the run chocked in the inside as men in uniforms give a matched ride. Running everywhere, carrying the exhibit like starch beats everything on the street to avoid the catch. Little confusion on different points quite focal driving in command like an authority seemingly local. Catching up the pace to end this mess is required hitting the target vehicle, the right has been acquired.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/2/2016 9:23:00 PM
Well written Couplet, Funom. Thanks for the comment..I'haven't been around lately. Hopefully that will change one of these days. Your poem took me on a scary chase. Good job! Annalise *~*
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Date: 10/24/2016 2:36:00 AM
Funom, Well penned every line. Enjoyed the read. A7................//hugs
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Date: 10/7/2016 10:54:00 AM
It sounds terrifying. Funom... all I sense is lots of innocent lives in danger... thanks for putting this out there. Linda
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Date: 10/1/2016 3:34:00 PM
you are always putting it out superbly you have got the artistic soul my friend loved reading this #rockasyouwalkbrother
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