Space

Space is a void avoid means something not to be trusted, like a vacuum of nothingness without empathy without a soul. Space a place not filled like my broken heart chilled, no one lingers in there because there is no one to care, when of love there is no trace can be found in a heart or space! © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2013 9:23:00 PM

I came here to congratulate you in case this was in that one contest. Wasn't it? I sure did enjoy it, but I see no congrats! How are you doing, Harry? Are you able to devote more time to your extra projects these days?

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/2/2013 7:12:00 PM

Interesting to go from outer space to inner space. If you have that void, I am so sorry. Best of luck filling it.

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 3/2/2013 9:15:00 AM

Really a deep and touched piece of work, the way you describe this is really clicked with the theme :) beautiful Harry! Way to go! :D - hug, Yanny

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/2/2013 5:16:00 AM

Is nothin just nothin or ain't nothin something and what made the nuthin and what was there before nothin was there?...awe inspiring stuff here my friend!...I am fascinated by space, the universe, the stars, you name it - Tim

Anthony Nutter

Date: 3/1/2013 8:34:00 PM

Your writing gets better with every write, hard to improve on perfection. Well done Harry

Kash Poet

Date: 3/1/2013 8:59:00 AM

Very nice approach by you harry.Love this.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2013 12:16:00 AM

Harry, I really enjoyed reading your interpretation of the theme. It's so interesting to see how people are tackling this one!! this one shows me what a deep and sensitive poet you are!

Dan Kearley

Date: 2/28/2013 8:53:00 PM

There is love all around you Harry....Broken hearts do leave such an empty void feeling though.But I will tell you,some people do care! Carry on my friend.

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/28/2013 3:56:00 PM

i have an empty space too but it seems to hold someone. i just keep it empty.

Heather Ober

Date: 2/28/2013 11:19:00 AM

Creative and clever - a wonderful combination! Loved reading your poem today, Harry!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 2/28/2013 9:31:00 AM

Harry; This is good. That space can one day be filled, but only God knows when. Smile - I'm watching you. Lucilla

Terry O'Leary

Date: 2/26/2013 12:39:00 PM

a void means a vacuum... nature abhors a vacuum... nature encompasses love... love will fill your vacuum... Terry (moving poem)

Betty Bolden

Date: 2/26/2013 7:59:00 AM

i love this

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/26/2013 7:50:00 AM

I am sure there is someone that lingers in your heart harry , how could they not xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/26/2013 7:18:00 AM

Straight to my favorites Harry. This is a profound piece, tiny yet vast like the space you write about. Well done my friend.

Constance La France

Date: 2/26/2013 6:34:00 AM

Harry, a wonderful write, I really enjoyed reading it today, constance

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/25/2013 10:46:00 PM

Good poetic descriptiveness of space.

Joseph May

Date: 2/25/2013 7:53:00 PM

great write Harry...best wishes

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/25/2013 7:35:00 PM

Harry....I loved the way you masterfully wove your understanding of the word into this poem. Lovely...I hope in reality your heart isn't chilled, but warmed by love and care! Hugs!

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/25/2013 6:16:00 PM

Harry so many different perceptions of the word space. Nicely done Harry. Best wishes on the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie

Skat A

Date: 2/25/2013 4:52:00 PM

Harry, space is a void i love to feel all the time. love is of nothingness to me. Good luck in the contest. 'take care~SKAT