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Sonnet:To a Friend

~Sonnet: To A Friend (Sonnet) It's sad that your love couldn't be true to you And I know you struggled so hard and long But life sometimes in the end can turn blue And there are times when some things can go wrong. But don't blame yourself for all of this mess For you it wasn't just written in the stars And some things are not meant to be for us But don't lose hope for your dreams can't be far. Today you cry for lost dreams and their cost But I hope your tears are gone by tomorrow You'll see that not all is completely lost Pray you find in the night the light that glow. Be strong and keep your chin high all the while Smile and never stop dreaming thru your struggle. Dorian Petersen Potter Aka ladydp2000 copyright@2008 November,6,2008

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Date: 2/16/2016 10:03:00 AM
Fine uplifting write Dorian, lovely rhyme amongst the hopefulness it conveys pointing to a future hope, may many find solace from this superb write.
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/27/2016 6:48:00 PM
Thank you so kindly,Gordon,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light God bless you!:)D
Date: 11/15/2008 6:50:00 AM
Beautiful! Fine form, flow and rhyming... and sublime sentiment. Love, Keith
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Date: 11/9/2008 9:55:00 PM
Very touching and full of hope. Nicely done Dorian . It was a pleasure to read please comment on mine would love your poetic insight. Micahel Torres
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