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Somewhere Beyond

Beyond the landscape of a different time, where I must go alone, you have watched me, as the sun goes down, and when the golden moon appeared. Nights have unfolded as a fragile place. Paths I've walked have been the same. But love, is still untouched across the cold, beyond the landscape of a different time
________________________________________________________ 10/27/14 For Emjambment Contest Sponsored By Rick Parise

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Date: 11/5/2014 3:57:00 PM
wow, Carrie. just beautiful. Congrats on the winners list.
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Date: 11/3/2014 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie.
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Date: 11/3/2014 9:22:00 AM
Carrie this is so beautiful ! N I love it, goes to my fav.! Congrats on ur win!
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Carrie Richards
Date: 11/3/2014 9:27:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dr. Sharma! I do so appreciate the support!
Date: 11/2/2014 11:28:00 PM
Carrie, it is quite moving. Should have got a higher placement.Congrats.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 11/3/2014 9:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jag, that was nice of you to say :)
Date: 11/2/2014 10:36:00 PM
Carrie this is one of my favorites of the winners. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/2/2014 6:44:00 PM
Beautiful, and so well-written, yet sad and emotional. Your enjambment poem flows so well. Congratulations on your win, Carrie. Sandra
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Date: 11/2/2014 2:30:00 PM
Seamless Carrie, lovely!Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 11/2/2014 2:24:00 PM
such a beautiful but sad emotional write Carrie - I hate the idea of being alone:-( Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/2/2014 12:48:00 PM
Beautiful!!!!Great emotions shine through leaving a trial of vivid imagery!!!!LOVE IT //////////CONGRATS CR
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Date: 10/28/2014 7:39:00 PM
very poignant and beautifully written, carrie...
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Date: 10/28/2014 9:09:00 AM
A very deep heartbreaking poem Carrie. One day the paths will come in line again.
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Date: 10/27/2014 11:31:00 PM
Very nice write Carrie! ;) xxxxx D.
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Date: 10/27/2014 10:38:00 PM
This is so very sentimental Carrie! loved to read this lovely morning! Gl in contest!
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