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Sometimes I hear voices telling me what to do Sometimes I feel sad watching over you Sometimes I want hope to make things right again Sometimes I want relief to take away the pain Sometimes I daydream of a brighter tomorrow Sometimes I pray for no more days of sorrow Sometimes I feel angry like I could damage you Sometimes I feel subdued enjoying ignoring you Sometimes I need love a cuddle or a kiss Sometimes I need sex this is a hit or miss! Sometimes I wish that all was happy and well Sometimes I imagine a life of fairytales.

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Date: 9/9/2009 2:31:00 PM
This is a different poem poem from the last with a different technique showing range of style, and celebrating your varied gift. I love the repetition, the alternate rhyme scheme, and the subtle statements that make us identify with you. Great technique.
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Date: 9/7/2009 1:32:00 PM
Joanne, I can really relate to this. Very well written.
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