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For Arthur Vaso, who is so important to me, and an inspiration to us all

Maybe not once in a lifetime, but certainly not often Someone enters your life Or maybe enters your life is not the right expression, waltzes with you, opens your eyes, confronts you, questions and challenges you, inspires you, accepts you fully and completely, loves you. And all the while the wind blows over this world, erases love, children, warps war everywhere forgets the helpless, dwarfs the powerless. It's too easy to hide, turn your head away, bury yourself in enjoyable pastimes
But tomorrow it is you, your house is gone You are exiled, your children are hungry or killed... Then what do you do? ?
Maybe not once in a lifetime, but certainly not often Someone enters your life Someone who with gentle force opens your eyes, With beautiful lines, books and music. And perhaps that is painful But remember this: it is because he has a beautiful heart, he wants the world to be a better place. *** April 23, 2017, Copyright © Darren White

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Date: 4/25/2017 10:43:00 PM
This is wonderful Darren. Everything about it, wonderful. xomo
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Darren White
Date: 4/25/2017 11:47:00 PM
Thank you, for Arthur because he's my friend and that kind of person.
Date: 4/25/2017 6:42:00 PM
You were destined to meet! Darren this such a poignant poem. Soulmates challenge us and help us attain our purpose. Sounds like a truly blessed friendship.
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Darren White
Date: 4/25/2017 11:46:00 PM
It is, Carol, he is a very special person :)
Date: 4/25/2017 2:19:00 PM
Goosebumps all over- 'You may say Im a dreamer...but Im not the only one' :)..A favE.
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Darren White
Date: 4/25/2017 11:45:00 PM
Beautiful comment, thank you so much my friend :)
Date: 4/25/2017 3:07:00 AM
This is so well written in style, format and content. It makes me very, very grateful this morning and thank you for that. Kai
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Darren White
Date: 4/25/2017 3:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Kai. No more words needed :)
Date: 4/24/2017 7:22:00 AM
The poem itself is an amazing piece of writing whether we know who it is about or not, because there is always, (or at least it seems that way) someone who comes into our life and makes a difference. A nice tribute my friend.
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Darren White
Date: 4/24/2017 7:35:00 AM
You have understood that we'll, there are people who have an impact on you. Different people, in different ways. And none of them I would want to miss. Thank you my friend :)
Date: 4/24/2017 5:50:00 AM
What a brilliant tribute to your friend. It reminds me of a line in one my favourite George Michael songs 'Praying for time': What's over there is over here now...
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Darren White
Date: 4/24/2017 7:17:00 AM
That is exactly what I meant here, and what Arthur often tries to say. Thank you :)
Date: 4/24/2017 1:04:00 AM
a wonderful tribute to your friend dear Darren. A Super 7 to you
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Darren White
Date: 4/24/2017 1:45:00 AM
I am glad you like it. Thank you for the 7 :)
Date: 4/23/2017 11:41:00 PM
Superbly done Darren...a tributes tribute...all the best...^WW^
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Darren White
Date: 4/24/2017 12:37:00 AM
WW, thank you :)
Date: 4/23/2017 10:08:00 PM
Wow, Duir! This is simply stunning work! Very touching my friend!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/23/2017 11:37:00 PM
He is so kind White Wolf! as I know you must know! You should join the poetry chat site if you ever have time!
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Darren White
Date: 4/23/2017 11:31:00 PM
Thanks Budgie :)
Date: 4/23/2017 5:57:00 PM
Darren you truly have a kind heart, you cant imagine how touching this is, you know I will be printing and keeping this poem. You are a true poet, a kind soul, and I have to say you bring out the best in all of us here. You inspire, you inspire all of us! I hope you realize just how much this is true!
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Darren White
Date: 4/24/2017 12:36:00 AM
I am happy you love this. For you, my friend <3
Date: 4/23/2017 4:44:00 PM
A wonderfully inspirational poem and tribute; and the layout is stunning!: A 7:) Amitiés
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Darren White
Date: 4/23/2017 11:30:00 PM
Ask Jan: when I started in Soup, I didn't WANT to do anything with layout :) Thank you, Anne-Marie.
Date: 4/23/2017 4:02:00 PM
What a lovely, lovely tribute this is for Arthur, Darren. He has a heart of gold and inspires us so with his wonderful poetry! 7 ; )
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Darren White
Date: 4/23/2017 11:29:00 PM
Thank you Connie, also for the 7 :)
Date: 4/23/2017 3:39:00 PM
How lovely for Arthur.
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Darren White
Date: 4/23/2017 11:28:00 PM
Yes, thanks Jean hugs
Date: 4/23/2017 3:31:00 PM
Darren, you and Arthur have inspired each other, and in so doing, we all benefit by recognizing the people who truly care about each other for unselfish reasons. Thank you for sharing your verses with us. Hopefully it will lead us out of darkness and ignorance.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/23/2017 11:38:00 PM
He is an angel, dont let anyone fool you!!! LOL :)
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Darren White
Date: 4/23/2017 11:27:00 PM
No angel, just me, myself. But thank you, Lin :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/23/2017 5:59:00 PM
He has inspired many, I know most people have good hearts, and I cant even put my finger on it, I just know Darren is, well like an Angel among us.
Date: 4/23/2017 2:56:00 PM
This is some piece of art. And very inspiring. Beautiful!
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Darren White
Date: 4/23/2017 11:26:00 PM
I am happy you like this, Akkina :)
Date: 4/23/2017 2:56:00 PM
gosh Darren for the third time today you and Arthur have brought tears to my eyes - what a wonderful tribute to someone who opens our eyes to so many injustices in the world:-) and I love the way you have formatted this:-) hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 4/23/2017 11:25:00 PM
Thanks Jan, and yes he does.
Date: 4/23/2017 2:33:00 PM
A very touching piece for a true inspiration to us all and a.voice with heart and compassion.
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Darren White
Date: 4/23/2017 2:46:00 PM
He deserves this, thank you :)

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