So Will Appreciate
So Will Appreciate (SWAP)
Could it be that my poems aren't charming
And never receiving comments is alarming
How they feel and think about each one
I have now finished and is finally done.
Certainly would be lying if I were to say
Don't make comments in any form or way
To yourself start keeping every thought
For your attention my poems have fought.
What in world must this message be saying?
I did discover comments others are delaying
Would they feel like having been in a big bind
When first receiving comments that are mine.
Swaps cannot be completed when only done
by one side. SWAP stands for SO WILL APPRECIATE
it when you will make a comment.
James Thomas Horn
Retired Veteran and Poet
RiverSea Plantation
Bolivia, NC
Copyright © James Horn | Year Posted 2015
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